Daniel Trotier
Patriotism
Patriotism, that is what sets America apart from all the other countries in the world. Our country has some of the most patriotic citizens. We’re one of the most blessed countries in the world because of our nation’s residents and their citizenship.
Our country is in the state is in because of the brave people who sacrificed their lives and everything they had for our country. For example, the soldiers who fought in the American Revolution. Enduring the hard, cold winter at Valley Forge. Low on supplies and ammo, but they managed to win the war. These people, some of them with only a musket and the clothes on their backs won against one of the most powerful countries in the world at the time. That is why America is what it is today. In the national anthem it says, “And the home of the brave”, that’s what our country is.
Our citizenship has helped our country progress. It has grown from 12 tiny colonies to one huge land mass. Citizenship is important because without it, there would be no one who did any nice things for other people and that would leave the world in chaos. If we never did anything like pick up litter and work with non-profit companies and so on, our world would be a stingy, old dumpster of a country. Mean people around every corner and no one to say, “How was your day?” or, “How can I help you?” The U.S. would be a living hell
To me patriotism means to be with your country and for it. Making it a better place and more welcoming than it already is. Patriotism is one of those things no matter how hard you try, you can’t get rid of it. That is why Patriotism is very important.
Very good. I like the description.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you write with passion. I noticed that you were writing about patriotism in the beginning, then you changed over to citizenship, then back to patriotism. I would try to stay more on topic. Other than that, it was a very good piece of writing and I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
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